from our first pitch It was clear that we needed to work more harder for our second pitch. we took on board all the feedback they gave us and realised we need to improve by not showing slides of what we have been doing (taking photos of boats) rather to show what the story is and go through the characters etc. a few bullet points below from our feed back
- Story is still unclear.
- Keep the description of story concise
- More imagery helping to describe the story
- Concepts
- More character designs
- Less about research
- Work on ending
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