second pitch thoughts and feedback

on our second pitch it was defiantly a huge improvement from last weeks one. on this one we presented the story by bullets points. for each bullet point freddy created to rough thumbnails of the main shots that will be in the story. we then went on to show a few character designs i come up with. here is the feedback that was given to us.

• Huge improvement on delivery
• Story is far clearer
• Good idea to put images coupled with describing the story

they then discussed with us that we now need some more thumbnails and also the characters to have some different expressions going on. feedback below

• Want to see more concepts
• Thumbnails finished for next session
• Wow images
• Finalized character designs